to my dad

• Artist: Kara Nami
• Description: it explains its self....
  hope the picture url works
• Date: 10/16/2009
• Tags: father

i feel lost with out u there, i miss ur voice and attitude
i hate knowung that u never even cared.
that all our hopes and memorys were jsut a ******** game
and all u ever wanted was some little girl to play.

what i think is worse is that i cant ever seem to hate u
i cant even get close to despising u
i just miss u more and more

i wanted u to be around me
and see me all grown up,
but now u've gone and taken from me
all the dreams u fed to me

so now i feel like im running on empty
all cus u showed u didnt care
it makes me cry all the time
trying to forget how i thought u were there

i did everything i could to believe in u
but how could i after u dared?

i dont know where u are at
i dont know if u bother to remeber
or if u even care

that u broke this girls heart, far more than beyond repair
and that despite it all she will keep on loving u
wishing every holiday that u where there.

but things are moving on
and i have to hide my tears
i mustint let my daddy know
i've shead a single tear...

Comments

[Macabre Forever]

Constructive Criticism: Use or Learn better punctuation, spell the word you.
That being said, my punctuation is hardly on point either, though I do try my best to spell check. I actually loved what you have written, it was deep and a bit moving. I hope to see more from you in the future.

[serenitys memory]

i like it. its sad and reminds me of my mom. :,( i hope things get better for you soon! :,)