Lost Forever

• Artist: Xunethra
• Description: Poem I wrote a while ago. It expressed my feelings at the time. Is it any good? Please comment.
• Date: 10/15/2009
• Tags: lost forever

I said I loved him didn't I?
I gave him what I had... didn't I?
He broke my heart...
And I don't know why.
Every time I catch myself hoping,
I force myself to remember,
He said "Goodbye".
Why can't I move on?
Why do I shed tears for him?
Does he know?
Is this why I feel so grim?

Comments

[iamlikeblood]

omg i can feel ur emotions... so sweet... 5/5 return the favor? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101815485#title

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Quite frankly, there is no artistic merit.