December Freeze

• Artist: Zanbu Hiroshi
• Description: The cool bitter winds of winter combined with my heartache resulted in, this poem.
• Date: 09/08/2009
• Tags: winter love hearts breakups seasons

Frosted leaves of what was left
before Jack Frost exhaled a breath
Ice has formed around my home
falling down as hard as stone
my trust once in, seasonal things
the happiness that spring could bring
and the warmth of summer, and it's glow
the chill of Autumn and winter's snow
but what chilled me more was pain anew
one that I saw not in view
she left me there in cold winter's night
brokenhearted and deprived of life
so now I wait here on Autumn's approach
and think of you whom I miss most
I need not hate nor curse your name
I'd rather wait forever since I'm to blame
maybe in another life, I could find you there
before winter freezes time, maybe you will care
so until that die, until I die, I'll search the world for thee
my love, my life, my only one, whom I lost in December's Freeze

Comments

[perd85]

this is a great poem, its bitter-sweet, its all around amazing, it gives you hope when you feel all is lost. but there's 1 tiny tweak id make, in the poem it states"i need not hate nor curse your name,but hope and pray that you will come back again" instead of again, id put someday, so it would rhyme