Poor Blue Sea...

• Artist: bassmaster_awesome
• Description: I saw the sea and it made me sad, i thought you would like to feel a shared emotion. I like to make pieces with a question and a story. I hope it makes you see things differently, or atleast make you think. Thanks for reading.
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: poor blue

Poor Blue Sea....

I look at thee, with great democracy. You give us the choice to pollute and control, yet deep within an anger soon unfold. washing out thousands, cleaning our act. The people with houses, well and truely pact. You choose so wisely, but in vein. We cary on, our world insane. If it could be stopped, it would do no harm. An apocolypse, with a lucky charm. A charm of hope, bringing us courage. At worlds soon end, we find the light, we look at people with delight. If it was only sooner the sea would say, it would then, finally pay. However at worlds edge, you make a pledge, to carry on. Forever lasting, need not fasting, for you have what you need, but still you pleed. I find it hard to understand, what were you thinking when you gave us land. Great many a choice you say, but did that really pay?

Oh Poor Blue Sea...


I see you there, with eternal graces. Never stairing, yet a million faces.

Thank You,
By Jack-Rufus Kelly

Comments

[Thora009]

(coming from the land across the sea) i see this alot. here, we have rivers so full of garbage, cities have to block off parts of the water to clean it. good poem. good idea. i'm an eco-nut anyway, so this makes me very happy.

[bassmaster_awesome]

hey to all the people who read this, 3 is a (bad rating) 4 is a (good rating) 5 is you (loved it) 2 and 1 are like epic fails... just saying because i have droped below a four star rating and i have gone around and seen alot of people who are under rated, don't lket this change you opinion on my rating, just for future reference when rating around gaia, thank you.

[Happiest_Dark_Neko]

This poem is one that makes sense to me. I personally like it. :]