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never leave me.
just save me.
my heart feels confused.
just because i dont look like i dont need you...it really means i do.
i feel like i dont need anyone but my heart lies sometimes.
someone help me.
send me free!
dont let me be here and die alone.
it feels like an empty room , just walls all around me.
im trapped.
i cant see.
all there is; is darkness,
i try to find you near me.
but i cant feel you around me.
the air is thickening.
its getting harder for me to breathe,
im losing air.
Never leave me.
just save me.
im scared!
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- by Heartless_WolfSpirit |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/04/2009 |
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- Title: Never Leave Me!
- Artist: Heartless_WolfSpirit
- Description: just a random poem i made. i got bored :l
- Date: 09/04/2009
- Tags: never leave
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Comments (2 Comments)
- vyctm - 08/04/2010
- I think the poem needs a little bit of structure. Right now it seems like it has none at all. The flow is decent. With work you may end up being the next Emily Dickinson.
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- Tomas Youngblood - 11/23/2009
- pretty good. 5/5 definitly
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