When Spring time comes

• Artist: kunoichi_hiiro
• Description: This poem I wrote about a year ago. I was tired of winter so I wrote a poem about spring. This is only one of many of my poem styles.
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: spring time comes

When the spring time comes,
And all is made anew,
I’ll spread my wings and fly;
I’ll leave the world behind.

The morning bird sings;
The morning dew glistens in it’s wings,
It sings as the sun awakens-
The world to a new beginning.

The brisk air is an after math,
Of a world once frozen in winter's wrath.
life once beneath the frozen rime
And all the world breaths a sigh.

The buds blossom without a worry,
Safe and sound from winters furry.
The Rain falls and revives the world,
Like tears from heaven falling earthward.

Raindrops cling to the flowers’ petals,
Gleaming and glistening like precious metals.
The spring blossoms are the vernal diadem...
The herald to all the seasons that follow.

Comments

[Daisy_Sakura]

i like it..it's beautifully flowing smile

[kunoichi_hiiro]

okay..thankyou. Well spring time makes one feel swept away.

[ProfessorKC]

You've got something here, but i'd need to edit it. It reminds me alot of some Chinese women's poetry dealing with the turning of the seasons (in tanslation of course) and needs someparing spell checking and revisiting of the idea of why your narrator will fly away (you do leave that one hanging by the way) ... some thoughts for the rewrite at least.