Unforgivable

• Artist: Deshi_Venshin594
• Description: Another poem for my friend Lunar. She is going through tough times and now they just got worse.
• Date: 08/18/2009
• Tags: unforgivable

The world is unforgivable.
How could it do this to you?
When you were already down.
Already struggling with problems.
It suddenly has piled on a massive one.

Why does it do this?
You didn't do anythings to deserve it.
You are kind, caring, and gentle.
Yet the world tears at you.

This world is unforgivable.
What is has done is horendous.
I can't believe what has happened.
And I am sorry.
Because this world is unforgiveable.

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

aaww... Deshi... thia made me cry.. in a good way. oh Deshi, this is already a wonderful poem, but it is special to me, even more because you wrote it for me. you are such a good poet. i love you big bro. 5/5 and fav, most definately.