What do I want

• Artist: WolfGang-Soul
• Description: Sometimes we know what do We want but are we capable to accept it
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: want

I know what want
But how could like this.
I have to run so far my land
To discover who I am

This not like a gift
But I should be glad
Perhaps I am one of the few
That realize there no time to come back.

I can forget what I did
To be where I am
All of this have reason
That for now I am not able to understand.

For me there no time to doubt
Because the world need me as I am.

I didn’t ask be like this
But I accept the way it is…
What do I want; step closer and see
I am the monster living under your skin

Comments

[Verlidaine]

Yes, on one hand I agree with her- that the english is disjointed, and the grammar not too great.
But if you could make the grammar better I think it could be a 5, because the poem itself is good.

[HTOB]

um
its disjointed i hav no idea wat ur sayin
the thought s hav to be more compete
srry i dont like it