im taking name suggestions

• Artist: Mark of insanity
• Description: i didn't want to name it something cliche like "love " or something so it has no name for now... -please tell me what u think of it
• Date: 07/31/2009
• Tags: havnt named

this fire on my skin that doesn't burn
the heat is so intense
and yet i want no relief
my world has gone black but for a sliver of light that illuminates your face
i think im in love...

Comments

[DJ mikey210]

i agree with Sukichii its awesome but you could fix the second line

[xx_INomBabiesForFree_xx]

Its awesome, but I think you should take and out of the second line and "yet i want no releif" its own line. to give it better rhythem. smile

[LaylaRae222]

i like it! =^-^=