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Hiding there,inside you tear
hating what you've become.
Your slipping your sliding
denying that your falling from grace
You cheat and kill though it sends me to chills
watching you die on the inside.
My unheard cries and tears
you realize that it is this you fear
With my eyes full of sorrow
and yours empty and hollow
You plunge the dagger into your chest
whispering with your last breath
Those sacred words
"I love you"
Hiding there, i still stare
at your lifeless body
With tears still falling
i hear darkness calling
And i close my eyes forever...
- by XBroken_AngelX16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/28/2009 |
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- Title: Hiding There
- Artist: XBroken_AngelX16
- Description: Ok this is about a a guy that slowly begins to turn into a demon while the girl he loves watches him become something he hates.When she finaly breaksdown he realizes that this is hurting her too so he kills himself so she'll stop hurting .Days later she is still with his dead body and lets herself fall into darkness
- Date: 07/28/2009
- Tags: hiding there
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Comments (3 Comments)
- lala9876 - 07/29/2009
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THIS WAS A STUPID POEM
I GAVE IT A 3!!!A HAHA WHO EVER MADE IT!!! - Report As Spam
- Heckova Biker Babe - 07/29/2009
- well written to convey the message although the first 2 lines dont have a rhyme scheme
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- Mutated Llamas - 07/28/2009
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*Schniffles* Soo sad. ;O;
However it is most definitely great!~
5/5.
;D - Report As Spam