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“Can I have a hug?” he asks.
“Can I have a hug on this gloomy day,
the eve of the day I lost something,
something that meant so much to me.”
“What ?” she asks.
“My heart…”
“I lost my heart,
on this same day my feelings went unsaid,
those close to me changed and left me behind,
and the world turn so much colder.”
“The pain was so great
it was eating me alive,
the cold felt so sweet
that I never wanted to move,
and the darkness so comforting
that I was hoping for death.”
“But something inside me didn’t want that,
and the price for escape from that
was to lock my heart in chains…
but I lost the key
and what is truly me is disappearing.”
“Why are you telling me this?
What can I do?” she blushes.
“Well Eva its simple
can I be granted a hug.
A hug from an earth angel
that can me save me from hell.”
“Why from me?” she asks in a quite voice
“It is not simple.
Its because I love you silly.”
She reddens unable to speak.
“So can I have a hug my sweet angel?”
She looks up and the word he wanted to hear was said
“Yes.
- by Nicholas Flammel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2009 |
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- Title: Hug
- Artist: Nicholas Flammel
- Description: I made this poem because a friend of mine had lost someone he loved and wasn't able to tell her that. He changed and was never himself again, but he fell in love again and this time he spoke it. So I made a poem for the lovely couple. May their love never die and live on forever.
- Date: 07/27/2009
- Tags: love hell angel heart
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lilithmae - 08/03/2009
- Awwwww..... I don't normally go for romantic stuff;but this is very good. 5/5
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- Valoralin - 07/28/2009
- wow is all i can make my voice say
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- ignite midnight - 07/27/2009
- thats amazing and cute smile
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