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Midnight wields the moon like a brush
Coating glossy oak leaves in opal sheen.
Wind shudders, the world’s last breath
Tinged with a melancholy wildness
And I am the flame beneath water’s surface.
Two warring halves, a torn whole.
Impulses charge the air and quiver deliciously
And are drowned in dignity, caution, doubt.
I wish to burn untempered,
But ocean’s depth, water’s steady ebb and flow
Leaves me a lone wistful halve.
Uncharred yet unfulfilled
My prudent twin drains me like the
Feasting of an insidious bloated spider.
Until wildness is diluted away, only
Some faint lethargic notion of fire uncaged
- by Intrepid Indigo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2009 |
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- Title: Fire's twin
- Artist: Intrepid Indigo
- Description: Please read. Please comment. Please rate. I love writing poetry, as well as short stories and hope to write a novel one day. Have fun reading. Don't Plagarize. Have a nice life.
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: fires twin poem laurenhughes
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Prophet Kross - 07/26/2009
- lolz u added a comment on one of mine, not a positive one, so i guess this is just a payback one xD, rhyming is not as constrictive as you think, and its the only way i like to write poems...u should read my other submissions, i have like 40 poems....
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- Intrepid Indigo - 07/26/2009
- If you enjoyed this poem I have several others on gaia and intend to add more over time
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- xXxDawnWillComexXx - 07/26/2009
- Again tt is amazing! :3
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- Intrepid Indigo - 07/26/2009
- Yay!!!! my first comment. Thx
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- panada0746 - 07/26/2009
- wow this poem is amazing and i really like it.
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