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why is it im losing my mind
Im searching but i cannot find...
My way, on this accursed line
the line that is my path
The line that is my course
Im losing everyone, One by one
After each groan i can hear the screams
The screams that haunt my dreams,
The ones that seem, like everywhere i go,
I can still hear, I still fear, But even after all these years
Im still here, but ive done nothing but cry these tears of blood
they flood my sight, and prevent me from moving
its like im stuck in the mud, but im sinking
It must be quicksand, Once u stop u start to fall
I need someone to give me a hand, Before i lose it all
So i try to call for help, Only to find my world melt
My head finally goes under, My arm still reaching
then i hear footsteps like thunder, And the ones i was seeking
grabs my hand and pulls me right outta of the sand
Then i apologize for being weak, And ill try to push my self
until i reach my peak, until i reach my limit,
i need to stay committed to my goals, before i lose it all
but its thoughts like thsese, that make me lose my mind
- by Prophet Kross |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2009 |
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- Title: Losing my mind
- Artist: Prophet Kross
- Description: about losing ones mind
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: losing mind
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Comments (2 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 06/01/2010
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I like the poem, and your writing. It's very good, though I just have a few teeny little problems. You have some spelling and grammar errors, and you should really spell a word, and not just put "u" or something. Make these little fixes and it'll be perfect, so I give a 4/5. Keep writing^^
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- the_ashen_child - 07/22/2009
- okay. you're really goof at writing and all, but you need to slow down or your gonna sprain something XP
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