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• Artist: xXtorn_apart_heartXx
• Description: i wrote this as a song but couldn't remember the tune so now it's a poem, i wrote at my choir concert while i was in the crowd waiting for my class to be called to the stage. Leave your comments and tell me what you think.
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: suicide thought tears trigger love

So much crying,
so many tears.
So many problems,
so many fears.
So much for making me feel loved,
so much for keeping me from dieing.
You left me,
with a bullet in my heart.
Now I can't think straight,
and I'm falling apart.
You've got me thinking of suicide,
you've got me thinking about the love that went by.
So much for being there,
when I needed someone to hold.
So no matter how many times you say you love me,
I'll never believe you.
Now sure be surprises if I don't say it back,
there's nothing you can do to make me change my ways.
So sorry you think I don't care about you,
when the truth is...I do.
You kissed me but then you pulled the trigger,
and watched me bleed.
Who knew loving you could be so hard,
thought you were all that I need.
Your the one I trusted to hole me tight,
and never let go.
But alter everything you've done,
now I know.

Comments

[27cutiepie27]

I loved it. I gave it a 5/5. But why are you so sad if you love him... don't leave him i think he still loves you. Just appolgise and say that he was right (because guys love being right) so go there is no time to waste. Just follow your heart and it will get you through life. Life is great so live it well. you can send me a message any time you want or if you need to talk or if anything is wrong.
sincerly,
27cutiepie27

[Fck Ya Nikkas]

You know sister it seems that all your poems are about pain and suffering. Is your life really that bad? I hope not. Wait these poems aren't about me are they?

[FoxfireAsaliEcara]

Lovely. A few spelling mistakes but any teacher I know would give it a B+ for good structure and creativity.

[Pwnage432]

nice...can u send me a message of wat the song's name is..would really appreciate it...5/5

[Alkestic]

it good i like and actualy song r poems just whit tune so dont worry it hard to put a poem a tune and the content of the poem is sadness mostly it good i give it 4/5