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God the Black Rose
How the peddles fall piece by piece slowly
not worried about the time passing by
How the Black Rose loses it's color of shine
The Red Fades to Black as for every cry
Silence and Death it appears to be,
The tears of clear turn to doom
Red coming out of me feels so good
No pain to what I've feared,
Let me be depressed and take all them pills,
I want my love to come back and change the Rose to Red
But only time it has Red is when I bleed my pain and misery out
I never take the chances I should
I don't know why I should
I guess cause I feel like that person deserves better
Better than me who is depressed and ugh the tears
coming give me a gun and blow me away
So I will see death x3

- Title: Black Rose
- Artist: Samie Out
- Description: NOT DONE WITH THIS POEM!
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: blackrose
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Scottish Fold Shinigami - 07/27/2009
- depressing
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- Cannibalistic Draco - 07/27/2009
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good overall, some thoughts;
"take all them pills" should be those not them
"but only time it has red..." only time it is red
"better then me..." better then I
otherwise ^ ^ good - Report As Spam