I'm Fine

• Artist: xxemojenny12xx
• Description: Love related.
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: fine

I'm fine without you can't you see you and I weren't meant to be
The flame we had has burned and died for many nights I cried and cried
My mind is strong but once was weak
I'm fine without you can't you see you and I weren't meant to be cry

Comments

[MillionDollarRansom]

i agree with gylfie513. but it would be a good section of a longer, more detailed poem. 2

[Gylfie531]

this feels more like a few sentences that lack punctuation strung together than a poem. you needed to break this up, and add commas, question marks, and periods. then this would make much more sense.