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when your whith me i feel like the world is make ice cream
strawberry,chocalate,and vanilla hills
rivers of chocolate syrup flow the land
as the skys rain sprinkles
cherrys for trees
banana's as boats for the drunk goats
child frolick in feilds of whip cream
puppies pee out rootbeer on gumdrop fire hydrants
and world hunger is now no more
and thats how
you make my life a whole lot tastier
- by XxXkoalas100XxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2009 |
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- Title: the world i see
- Artist: XxXkoalas100XxX
- Description: ice cream land weeee
- Date: 07/19/2009
- Tags: worldicecreem
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Vivinica - 10/20/2009
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A nice, fluffy poem. A nice Change in pace for once in a while. It makes my teeth ache just thinking about it! XD
I'd suggest playing with the punctuation and wording a little bit if you wish to try to perfect this poem, and maybe warn people in the description that its a light poem, no heavy depression or anything like that ^^ - Report As Spam
- KnaveAnt - 07/22/2009
- Funny, but not all that goo.
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- queen of naughty - 07/21/2009
- it was ok
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- OmecronGambit - 07/21/2009
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Do not like. Where's the emotion.
1/5 - Report As Spam
- MillionDollarRansom - 07/20/2009
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ehh it was kinda lame.
any poem u make should have more feeling 2 it.
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