Wat do you see?

• Artist: Commander RedBlood
• Description: this is a poem that i wrote a while bac and i never really read it out loud but i was bored so i thought i'd post it on here.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: poetry what

What do you see?
When you look at me?

Do you see a monster?
Do you see an animal?
Or do you see a freak of nature?

Can you see past the zits, eyes, and hair?
And see,
The real me
Or do you judge by my attitude, my clothing, and my looks.

What do you think?
When you look at me?
Do think i'm an alien?
Do you think i'm a monster?
Do you think im from another dimention?
You tell me!

People judge by appearence.
They judge by clothes.
You tell me what you think of me.
Without the look of my clothes...
But by my personality....
then ask yourself....
what do you see... when i look at myself?

Comments

[ceresB]

The message is good.

[Simple Kittykat]

personally i think you need to put more time and thought and effort into it. and there is a lot of questions. just maybe .... 2 many. something to think about.

[IEpic-Amaya]

that was great u should keep doing wat u do i love it. u can feel the prespective of wat it mean. bravo, bravo!!!!!!!!!!