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I am a piece of wood, in a world full of people made of steel...
Every time something bad happens to people, a word, a thought, a kick, a noob, it comes to the people in the form of a nail.
When a nail hits the people of steel, they usually get over it soon,
in the worst case,
they have a bruise or a scratch.
But when the nail hits the piece of wood, it goes through it...
And it stays in there for a very, very long time...
waiting ....
waiting...
waiting for the hammer...
"Please hammer! Turn yourself upside down for me... once... this one time..."
Even if the nail is out of the piece of wood,
you will always see a big hole...
That will never disappear...

- Title: A strange way of writing
- Artist: Jovansky
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- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: world
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxcarlehhxX - 07/19/2009
- really, really original. excellent way of capturing people into your writing :]
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- cronolexus - 07/16/2009
- ...I like it. The metaphor is very original yet clear at the same time, and the passage easily communicates your point of view to the reader.
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