Slit eyes

• Artist: Cosplay 4eva
• Description: This is a story i wrote
  thats realy all i can say
• Date: 07/13/2009
• Tags: poem love slit eyes

I feel like a girl with slit eyes, Who cant see whats infront of me.
Is it love or not? How am i suppost to know?
Am i falling in love or into a black hole?
Are you with me all the time? Do you realy love me?
You say you love me... but is it true?
Are you with me all the time? I cant know.
All i can do is with lay with you and not let go.
I want to trust you... But how am i suppost to?

Comments

[Emorunningshadow]

i feel all emotion when i read thisright kow i'm crying i would be greatful if u read my poem ALONE....Oh and thumbs up from me the emo beond great job

[padilla97]

very good job

[redblazeloves]

very emotional, the unstability of love. i loved it

[Pickle Inspector]

I feel alot of emotion in this poem. The dark feelings are quite apparent.
Good job!