heartache at its worst

• Artist: Koneko Moved
• Description: so many scenerios where this could play out,
  and yet yours was the only one i was thinking about....
• Date: 07/13/2009
• Tags: heartache worse suicide

you always wondered if she'd make it out alive...
but you never cared to notice that she had already died.

you'd look over and she'd turn away,
so many thoughts and yet nothing to say.

days took forever and nights dragged along,
the poor girl just couldn't go on.

she never cried, never made a sound.
she just fell face first into the ground..

gun to her mouth, bullet to her brain..
you tried to stop her, but it was too late.

that night you cried all the tears...
that she had kept within for so many years.

Comments

[Koneko Moved]

thanks you guys :]

[S u n s h ii n e Dae]

I have to agree with DDrox316, this is amazing. It gives you a feeling of emotion without it being all sappy and overplayed. 5/5 and favorited.

[DDrox316]

OMIGOSH that was purely amazing, like seriously, i love this poem!
it's really sad, but i like how in the end it says "You cried all the tears that she had kept within for so many years" !! (actually, i think it might sound better if it was "kept in" instead of "Kept within"...)
LOVE IT 5/5 and favorited (:

[Koneko Moved]

so comment me telling me what you think and what you rated me.... i want to know!