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Tears welling up, ready to cry.
An emotional mess.
She walks through the woods.
Blind to her reasons,
She stumbles on.
A bright light ahead,
Curiosity overwhelms.
Into the light she steps.
Never did she think she'd find,
A world far beyond her wildest dreams.
A land of great wonder.
Or so she thought...
Fire bursts into the air,
The earth breaks
And the sky turns black
Demons and monsters
As far as the eye could see.
Hypnotic creatures calling her forth.
Telling her of evil deeds
That no mortal man could ever imagine
Done to another foe.
The darkness flows from the trees
Encircling her heart
As she turns her back to leave
From whence she came
The path she just walked
Is now a great blaze
No longer is she in a land
Of hopes and wonders,
But in a new Hell
- by Draconis Alduari |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: New Hell
- Artist: Draconis Alduari
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Description:
This is basically a song I wrote for my band.
It would be nice for me to get many peoples opinions on it. - Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: hell
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kelfas - 07/10/2009
- nice writing 5/5
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- Draconis Alduari - 07/10/2009
- nope.... it just popped into my head..... when i was writing it, i saw it more as a music video
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- shadow_demon_Kyo - 07/10/2009
- Hibiki, is it about anyone in particular??
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- Megan_Espeon - 07/10/2009
- Very nice ^_^
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- jehu_lord - 07/09/2009
- that was awsome
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- Bryn Grimhildr - 07/08/2009
- Very strong lyrics. I would in fact love to hear it as a song. Well Done!
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- Madness Delivers - 07/08/2009
- Really good, I commented on your journal, so... lol, you know what I said there, same still applies.
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