I Look, I See

• Artist: Diosa de Armarrio
• Description: It's gone through a few revisions, but I really like how it turned out.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: dreams growingup changing future life

I look.

I look into your eyes and see fear.

I look into your actions and see indecision.

I look into our past and see love.

I look into the future and see uncertainty.

I look into my soul and see defiance.

I look into my thoughts and see nostalgia.

I look into my pain and see growth.

I look into the night and see passion.

I look into his touch and see desire.

I look into her words and see need.

I look into my reflection and see imperfection.

I look into the world and see destruction.

I look into midnight and see movement.

I look into twilight and see the unchanging.

I look into death and see reason.

I look into life and see beauty.

I look into the wind and see the unseen.

I look into the stars and see apocalypse.

I look into the sky and see hope.

Comments

[Kuchuni]

Intersting. It's quite different but also beautiful. I liked the comparions and how at the end it was optimistic. Very nice although I'm not much of a fan of using the same beginning for each sentence/phrase but it went well. Good job!