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when thoust shall wake,
only i,
thy lover of beauty and swoon,
shall cast thy love,
not thy lust,
apon you,
for the moon is casting,
its glowing aura so gentle and sweet,
as is your kiss,
and your everlasting temptation,
against my heart so,
your hungering,
for my love and touch,
so strong and so hopeful,
so constant,
though not overbaring,
the night,
it cries for thee,
as do i,
for thee and thine presence,
i shall climb every tallest mountain,
and dwindle,
through every strained,
and merciless desert,
thou i only a woman,
and thee such a man,
i would bleed myself,
if only for thy single drop of blood,
you'd taste me,
thy rose,
you bestowed apon me,
once apon a yester time,
has grown wild,
with carnivorous thorns,
and blackened,
at the dawn of every sunset,
i feel thy wisper,
cantering slightly,
through thy evernecent breeze,
calling to me,
reminding me of your love,
i see a figure,
through the singed and murdered willows,
it is thy lover,
coming to me,
thy night has come again,
only to remind me,
that thy lover,
thou who lovest me true,
is with me
- by MJgwarrocker66 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/06/2009 |
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- Title: thy nigh shall remind thee
- Artist: MJgwarrocker66
- Description: it is a love poem that i wrote in the old laguage. it expresses a woman's love and tells of a single night's dream. please leave a comment and a rating.
- Date: 07/06/2009
- Tags: nigh shall remind thee
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Sixth L - 07/10/2009
- Good, but needs capitalization/spell check. Lines seem uneven, could benefit from combining lines in each stanza. 3/5
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- prisoner_2_society - 07/06/2009
- oh my GOD! this is amazing and beatutiful. when i read it, it was like a movie was playinging my head acting it out. i think that's what any writer should aspire to be able to do.
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