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I look in the mirror and what do I see?
A sad helpless face staring back at me
Her face is so pale, with rings under her eyes
It seems all she wasnt is to go and die
Her hair is all messy her clothes are all torn
Her fragile face looks tired and worn
Oh how on earth could it possibly be
That the girl in the mirror is actually me
I remeber a time when it wasn't like this
Those happy times I'm beginning to miss
Those joyful times when in the mirrior I saw
The cheery girl that I was before
Oh how I wish I could turn back time
And see that happy reflection of mine
But I am no longer the child I was before
The happy face in the mirrir exists no more
This ugly reflection stares back at me
With eyes so dull it can barely see
I don't want this girl to really be me
This is a face that I don't want to see
The mirror is shattered, my fists are stained red
The sad girl is gone but she's still in my head
I won't make a difference even if I can't see
That sad, pale reflection will always be me
- by ms_rae_black |
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- | Submitted on 07/03/2009 |
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- Title: Reflection
- Artist: ms_rae_black
- Description: A poem I wrote...
- Date: 07/03/2009
- Tags: reflection
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/05/2009
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lol. the first thing that popped in my head was a line from MCRs "The End" where he says "If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see/ You can find out first hand what it's like to be me"
As for the poem, it isnt terrible. work on developing some stronger rhymes though. 3/5. please vote and comment back! - Report As Spam