can't stop

• Artist: cuppcake00
• Description: this is a poem about a girl who can't stop his feelings for this "guy" she loves. D: but the guy said to her many sweet things and the girl believed it, then one day, the guy and his EX got along again. then the girl decided to not love him anymore and have NO communication with him. :| but then, she saw the guy again and the guy was looking at her eyes and smiled...
• Date: 07/01/2009
• Tags: cant stop

on day in my life, you came knocking to my door
my heart opened and my love for you grew more.
i can't understand this feeling i have
you're not handsome or such, but i feel the love

one day i got your number
and we texted together
you said such sweet things to me
and said you're also in love with me

i believed the lies i heard from that night
i always call to you when i'm in fright
you answer my calls and say such things
but one day, things disappeared.

i heared the news you're ex came back
you two just giggled and laughed.
you loved her eversince you broke up with her
and now you and her got along again together.


why did i fell for you?
lies and you face got along too
DAMN. this love is killing my heart
so i decided to not have conversation with you...

then 1 month after, i saw you again
the love that i felt was happening again
i saw you smile, giggle and laughed
oman, i cant stop the feeling that i have. neutral


..end.. biggrin

Comments

[Knit Purl Knit]

Maybe you should just edit before you post next time.

[cuppcake00]

haha! and the 'you' there, in the 5th part. :]] the sentence 'lies and you face got along too' haha... you there is really YOUR. :]]

[cuppcake00]

oh the 1st word there, the "on" one, it is really ONE. :]]

[cuppcake00]

aww. thanks! :" wink

[I Am singer776]

i like it! its kind of like one of my poems called Everytime

check it out type in my username

I Am singer776

and you can also check out my other poem