All alone

• Artist: truehiddenking
• Description: .......poetry of the purest form.....*hehehe*
• Date: 06/28/2009
• Tags: alone

I stand here all alone
My happiness already gone
I'll stay here till the end
Just as long you'll stay my friend
Maybe I'm just wasting my time
Have you gone already home
I stand here in the cold
My heart it won't ever fold
In the rain, around this pain, such a shame
You are my sunshine
Speak of you as my holy line
I stand here trapped in hail
Have i already fail
When you leave
My soul it bleed
Your all i need
I stand here by myself
I guess it couldn't be helped
If you stand by my side
If you never hide
I won't be here, standing outside.....all alone....
...because your gone

Comments

[truehiddenking]

-_-' as much as I would like to comment,
on your comment, it is what is and I can't change your personal opinion

[Zero Ember]

sorry, the poem it's self is kick a** but try choosing your words a little better so that it's not so hard to precive the true meaning of your poem, remember poems dont have to rhyme to be a poem...4/5