Figurines and Trinkets of Time

• Artist: Oblivious Sharada
• Description: This is about a desperate woman.
  She's an artist but her husband commited suicide.
  By being an artist, she created her love with her skill of art.
  Using a dummy utencil for art and molding wood to shape a human.
  Once finnished, the woman realized what she was doing and destroyed her creation before it had a chance to live..
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: figurines trinkets time crazy insane

Figurines and Trinkets of Time

Figurines and trinkets of time
put one and one together to make the love of mine
from far they came, no hesitation, like a game
Everyone was fine, made from trinkets of time

Hearts are tough to carve and beat
Start with a word and continue to repeat
Happines, hope, joy and then love
Carve a heart to beat for the man of figurines and trinkets of time

A face of a child formed to fit a man
with this much beauty I mine as well be damned
dearest eyes closed and open with extereme green
Yet a man, as if a woman, you begin to dream
' Is this person made of figurines and trinkets of time?
made to fit someone such as my kind? '

I'm so much less devine,
so much less devine

I have damaged my figurine made of trinkets of time
A woman like me does not belong with someone so fine
Take one down and minus the other to crush the love of mine
hold his carved heart in my hand and scream

Someone that has never lived got the chance to die
Goodbye my figurine made of trinkets of time.

Comments

[cinderheIIa]

This is sooooooo good, but I had to read the description to understand it. Do not change what you are doing, but when you write imagine yourself as someone who does not know you or you mind - how would they read it and what would they see. Be this person and make sure your poem is able to be found through reading between the lines. You story doesn't have to be obvious, but it should be able to be found through searching. Do not stop writing because you seriously have so much skill. Read