Swallows

• Artist: Sunafire
• Description: A.K.A Poetry from a commitaphobic.
  It's self explanatory if you read it.
  The title comes from the fact swallows fly away for the winter.
  
  Please comment :)
  I'll accept criticism if it's constructive.
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: swallows commitment love scared future

I realise.
Tonight there's nothing between,
Me and the door that stop my,
Feet from walking away or on,
Any other day when I get scared,
And feel underprepared for a world,
Outside that's waiting for me and you,
It refuses to give me a clue to wether,
We'll ever get our happily ever after,
Or even in a few months there will still,
Be laughter and we'll still smile when,
We see each other with that look in,
Your eyes which reminds me that,
These days I feel so alive because,
There's love and loss but what is the,
Cost of walking away tonight without,
Looking back when I know I love you,
Yes I know you love me too but there's,
These possibilities inside my head.

And I'm scared.

Comments

[Panic Pirate]

I'm loving the enjambement, it's really symbolic of how we rush out our sentences in times of fear and realisation. Also how the last line is separate from the others; it's really powerful and we all feel this way sometimes smile
I've said it before and I'll say it again: you're goooood smile