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The eye of the grat,
rests upon you,
when you turn your back,
to say and do,
The eye of the great,
might not be the one,
to save us from,
the sin undone,
The eye of the great,
has cursed us all,
to go to hell,
and burn through all,
- by blood_sucker4life114 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: The eye of the great
- Artist: blood_sucker4life114
- Description: I watched "The Lord of the Rings" for like the 1,000,000,000,000 time last night and i was thinking and i came up with this....hope u like
- Date: 06/14/2009
- Tags: great
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Comments (5 Comments)
- blood_sucker4life114 - 06/19/2009
- thankyou!
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- MasterShockNawe - 06/15/2009
- Pretty good
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- blood_sucker4life114 - 06/15/2009
- thankyou both...i know every detail of Lord of the Rings because that like...my specialty...ask me anything and i know it...so you would get it if you were me.
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- Meeko512 - 06/14/2009
- i loved it...nice job...you accidently spelled "great" wrong in the first line...thats the only flaw ^^
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- [-Henshin-] - 06/14/2009
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You misspelled "Great" in the first line. I also don't understand the "To say and do" line. Or the "Sin undone" for that matter.
It's got potential.. but I just can't follow it. I mean, I get the LotR reference and all.. sort of.. - Report As Spam
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