Dying Inside.

• Artist: ElectraShocked
• Description: a true story with a bit of an exaggeration
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: dying inside

Tripping up the stairs
Falling from the sky
Losing a love
Blood dripping from your knife
Watching your best friend die inside.
An emotional thing,
That I show no sympathy towards.
I don't know how to react,
Or even what to say.
For every word I utter
Seems to eat your life away.
Watching your best friend die inside.
How it happens, i have no clue.
Why she lets it kill her....
Even when her life will wither
And fall to pieces to the ground
She'll take the secret to the grave.
Blood dripping from her knife,
And spilling on the floor,
While I lay sleepless across the door.
My eyes wide as I hear her sobs,
And her restless blood hit the floor.

Comments

[Nana Shinu Ai]

lovely great job

[PoisonousMoonlight]

umm the Well that's simply beyond me part threw me off of the rythym I can't remember how to spell rythm oh no!!!

[ElectraShocked]

Some parts of it are true, some are entirely fiction. My best friend was in fact a cutter. The end of the poem is a metaphor, I knew she was a cutter even though she tried to hide it from me, she couldn't. I saw the cuts and the scars, and I saw right through every pitiful lie she made up. She still doesn't discuss it with me. And I think I was the reason she did what she did, I tried to blow it off and make a joke of it, and that would only hurt her more. I was oblivious to her pain.

[Mentalpatient1288]

if this happened 2 u it would b so traumatizing, even if it was exaggerated

[Blackfire Banshee]

whoa. love it. 5/5

[Vampire_Kuro_1213]

Good poem, but sad. 5/5 from me.

[ElectraShocked]

This isn't one of my best on-the-spot poems. I was in a rush and had to cut it short biggrin