My depression

• Artist: AliceCullen1030
• Description: I wrote this poem to help my boyfriend out on an assignment in writing, although all the words ring true. Tell me what you think!
• Date: 06/03/2009
• Tags: depression

Into the deep.
Into the dark.
See all the pain inside my heart.
Under their gazes.
Under their "care."
They tell me it's something that's not really there.
I can't control it.
It's something unfair.
All they can do is sit there and stare.
I don'y know how to stop it.
I don't know what to do.
This is my depression, and it's not something new.

Comments

[XenialShot]

wow, i really like it, can relate. nice job.
fix the don'y though!!!

[Ren Yukiko]

nice... i like it and i can relate... keep it up smile

[mushy moo moo milk]

that is really good you should write more!