When?

• Artist: JayEagle
• Description: A poem based on many things in life. War, parenting, Love. All key assentials in life.
• Date: 05/29/2009
• Tags: when

When?

When can we say, "Our troops are finally coming home"?
When can we say, " The war is truely over"?

When can a child grow up to his biological mother and father?
When will parents stay together for the sake of the child?
When will parents stop getting divorce's and start thinking more for the children?

When will this; War loving, Blood shedding, Money based country wake up and find new hobbys instead of killing(war) And living for politics?
When will people really marry someone they are sure they'll be with for ever instead of just what they can get with?
And if it doesn't work out stay together for the childs sake not your own selfish desires.
And last of all, When will this world change for the good and stay that way?

When?

Comments

[A Krysis]

It's amazing smile
I know I will never grow up with my biological father because of the divorce....I been through 2
5/5 wink

[Moo Forever]

A great message, I must say. ^_~ Keep up the good work...This is pretty influential. ;]

[HurtRebelChick]

i love it. ur a great writer

[crecre_205]

Hey hun. It's beautiful! I really do love it, whether you believe me or not. lol
It's strong. And it tells a message that people really do need to listen to and hear. I'm sure once others read and comment it, they will agree and state the same.

You're an excellent writer. ^_^