The Misfortune Angel

• Artist: AshesOfWar
• Description: This is a poem i wrote, the first one, im not sure if its good so, i'd like to know wht u think bout it.
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: misfortune angel poem

The heart of the holy knight
remains within the dark night,
what began as a miracle,
now its a terrible nightmare.

The heart of his beloved one
now lies inside the dead corpse,
there beside the white rose,
dwelling between the dead ones.

It was an impossible love,
and now in front of the moon light,
he begs to god to be might
now that what he wanted was lost.

Between the dead corpse
and in front of the white rose,
a new flower seems to born,
wich contains a beautiful butterfly,
that rises to the sky with total freedom.

Comments

[Glacies Everto]

I like it. remember about criticism, ppl are allowed their opinion, and everybodys is diff, but that doesnt always make it right