Alone

• Artist: fruitloop1202
• Description: its just a little poem i wrote to get me angere out at my friend who stole my boyfreind then sucked each others face off in front of me. it sucks but it is life and it hurts to deal with
• Date: 05/27/2009
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I sit here with nothing to do
Im all alone and without you

As she looks at you
You kiss her and i want it too

You churn my stomach
With every punch you take

Why cant you help my belly ache
All you have to do is stop for my sake

I sit in the corner in despair
My heart truly wants to repair

You tell her you love her
But are you trully sure

Please dont hurt her just like me
I actually had a warning to flee

I cant stand this anymore
So im just gonna close the door

I hate to look upon your face
I see your beauty, poise and, grace

I sit here with nothing to do
Im all alone and without you.

Comments

[nefarious e]

Sad and interesting - just watch your punctuation (I'm, not Im & can't, not cant; capital letter for 'I'; there's no need for a comma after 'and' in the second last verse; and some full stops/question marks wouldn't go amiss either) and spelling (truly has one 'l' not two).

2/5, but keep trying.

[Shaky cutie9]

awww so sad sad 5/5