Love

• Artist: Happy-Faces-Anira
• Description: This is the first poem i ever wrote...i was young and just thinking,not THAT young,about two years ago mabye a little more.
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: love

LOVE.....the hardest thing to do in life,one moment your'e in love,the other your'e crying about lost love.its hard to try to find the right one.your always looking always..........hurting.the joy of love is it worth the pain?maybe or maybe love is something that no matter what it always finds a way to hurt you.to love and let live is what they say.but to someone whos in true love...........they cant live.to love and lose is common.you cant avoid it.to love someone you doesnt share your feelings is the worst of them all. you love knowing that every day without words theyre rejecting you.it hurts,it hurts because you need that person but when they love someone else it almost kills you.you cant stand it.it hurts more then ever and you cant stop it but in your heart you know that you will always and forever love them.

Comments

[an_t_social8]

Pretty good, but a lot of repetitive language and lack of capitalization and spaces...No offense, I'm just touchy about stuff like that. 4/5