Take My Hand

• Artist: Moozicmonkey
• Description: Well, the main message of the poem: You can't live life to the fullest unless you take some risks.
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: take hand

Take my hand,
Run through the wind.
Climb to the sky,
As lightning pulses through your veins.

Don’t let go,
The fire won’t stop burning.
Fall into vast pits of magma,
And emerge without a scratch.

Just hold on,
Let us be known to the world.
Dancing on top of this planet,
And we won’t care.

Stay with me,
As we fly above our past lives,
Mocking how we used think,
With no hints of regret.

I won’t let go,
As long as your presence is certain.
Together,
The world will be our adventure.

Comments

[Stoner Shriek]

The layout was was well done. This poem makes me want to get away from my computer, if only for a few hours, to go live life. So your readers can definitely feel your message. It was very imaginative, creative, and I see no errors. Great job, and keep it up!

[scitama]

That was an excellent poem smile I totally got the message in your poem. Also another one: Don't hide your love for someone, express it and you'll find that everything is still okay. BTW, thanks for commenting on my poem smile

[UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy]

Hi! ^^ I'm also a poet. I actually enjoy writing a variety of things, mostly childrens-type poetry (when writing poetry), so genrally I like to read things that ryhme. That's probably why Dr. Seuss and Shel Silverstein are my two favorite writers/poets. But yeah...anyway....I just really enjoyed this poem, even without rhyme, lol. Just thought I could comment for ya! Hope to talk soon, kk? Much l8r.....

-That Guy