Love and loss

• Artist: XxsomethingspiffyxX
• Description: This was my first poem i wrote out of 3 and im going on with more. i wrote this for the girl i love. im just nervous to give it to her =(
  if your a hater well idc screw yourself.
• Date: 05/26/2009
• Tags: love loss

Beneath the lies and darkness shroud
My broken heart lies on the ground
The pain and suffering that has been dealt
Is nothing to the pain i have felt
Lost and alone, alone and lost
I have felt love but to what cost
Broken feelings lost and alone
If only I could make them known
When is the time to say what you feel
when everyone seems to disappear

My soul is lost never to be found
Buried deep within the ground
What`s done is done i cannot undo
The uncertainty cast unto you
I live my life not knowing how
Things may have turned out
When darkness strides into this world
I try to make my voice heard

Endless torment of my life
Brings along pain and strife
Chaos reigns and tears apart
What I have worked so hard to start
Complete loss without gain
How do you remember my name

Peace and calm
Tranquility
It is not so far from my ability
Please just look and see
This is truly me
Darkness invades in my dreams
But does not prevent you to be seen
Above all else
Thought not to be true
Still my heart tries to be with you

Comments

[Princess Arcainess]

So sweet! biggrin

[xXsecret_artistXx]

i like it. its a really great poem. 5*

[GoogleImagesAmazing]

Extremely good, keep up the good writings and you'll get the stars you want smile