Liar Liar

• Artist: dark mistris
• Description: This poem says that guys say a lot but they don't keep what they say all the time.
• Date: 05/26/2009
• Tags: liar liar

You said i
Was your everything
You said i
Was the one You played me like a radio
Your use to love that i
Had no shame
Put my pain into words
Hold that nife to my wrist
Tell me you'll love me like a star
Tell me you'll love me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breathe me until your last breath
Liar Liar
Day by day
i feel the drag
just sit bak and watch me fall
Hold your eyes to my face
Call out, all my name
Tell me you love me like a star
Tell me you'll love me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breathe me untill your last breath
Liar Liar

Comments

[-KimDarling8D-]

Hmmm I understand where your coming from.
But it is wayyy to obvious what is happening..
Try some larger words to sort of confuse the reader?

I thought It was okay,
3/5

[Ghostface jazz13]

i love this song. ur great and i totally understand ur pain cuz i go through a lot of betrayal and emotional abuse. i write songs about how i dream of making it through. i really like your song.

[x-blushinq]

nice woork i love it..it made me go thinking..

[Lady Messmer]

Wow....speechless! Nice work, keep going at it! Check out my work!