"Why?"

• Artist: Twiggity Twang
• Description: A poem that illustrates how a girl I like feels about me from my perspective...
• Date: 05/23/2009
• Tags: hate love wonder anger

I just want to know…
Why is it that you’re so cold to me?
Why do you hate me?
It’s not that I try to anger you,
Nor do I try to bring myself hatred from you.

I used to think you were nice, kind…
But now…I talk to you, and you hardly even reply.
I compliment you, and you disregard it.

You used to be nice to me,
You used to smile when I was around.
But now…You refuse to look at me,
And I feel your hatred of me when I’m near you.

It feels as though you’ve ripped my heart out and eaten it,
And now I start to wonder…
Why do I love you?
Why?

Comments

[Lord Bubbleygirl]

hey (talking to commenter below) i loved the poem it was great
(talking 2 u) awwww im srry u feel this way sometimes i do to. i look up to someone but sometimez i feel like she hates me, so i feel the same way u do. good job 5/5

[TheKhamaseen]

why... does everyone's writing suck so bad?
seriously, i mean... there was no mystery, no reason to re-read, and the message of the poem was in no way profound... just factual- expositional.

[Xkm1058x]

that i---IS BEAUTIFUL WOULD YELL AT THE PERSON WHO HURT YOU