The Bad Day

• Artist: Mizz_Viet_Linda
• Description:
• Date: 05/21/2009
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I remember the screaming
I remember the pushing
I remember the riping
I remember the tears
I remember the door slamming
I remember me sitting and crying
I remember writing a note why im mad
I remember trying to relax
I remember locking my door
I remember looking out the window
I remember no one there
I remember the quiet air
I remember walking down stairs
I remember looking around
I remember everyone gone
I remember waiting for someone to be by my side

Comments

[Purin-chii]

Instead of putting "I remember" in every line I'd rather you have the first line with "I remember" and list off the rest like that. I'm not fond of repetitive words. It made me kind of sad to read this because of the loneliness you describe :[
4/5

[mrazndude1984]

those days were bad..