As The Sun Will Set

• Artist: Ironclad infernal
• Description: This is a poem that i wrote for my final exam in English.
  The rules were that i had to write a poem that used the words: Gutter, Paper, Shadow, Puddle, and Streetlamp.
  lol.
  I'll probably re-write this using better words but for now it is as is.
  Please comment or ask questions about this poem, as i will gladly reply.
  Enjoy =)
  (Also, if you don't already know this, the dashes( ------ ) indicate a pause in the poem.)
• Date: 05/20/2009
• Tags: fades sinking soul cries shadow

As the sun will set--
My shadow slowly fades--
Much like the life I used to have--
It will get dimmer yet.
--
Standing in a shallow puddle--
Yet slowly sinking down--
Much like the care I used to have--
I'll too, soon surely drown.
--
My Soul, disintegrating--
Like paper in the gutter--
Much like the cries for help I yelled--
You will not hear a mutter.
--
Then you came, back too my life--
The light which you foretold--
Much like the streetlamp, that came on--
And made my shadow, bold.

Comments

[Ironclad infernal]

thank you ^_^
edited "too" to "to" now biggrin

[Lilithmae]

This is good,although you misused the word 'too'. 4/5