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Dying feathers cascade against the zephyrs
What pain did cause those healing tears to stream down
The face I once traced with trembling fingers
Another haunting song marvelling what you’ve found
Calling for you to dig and dig; dig deeper
To reach the gate to the Beyond and more
Stare down at empty hands; you now remember
The spade lies locked behind the mystery door.
A key in your palm; useless; glowing colder
Like the light in the eyes that took you in
Tranquilize, cut the cord; we’re done: it’s over
Frozen at the circle’s end; let’s begin:
“I love you” whispered in your ear, stop breathing
Stardust lingers in the dew-soaked bliss
Skipping stones across ponds to find a meaning
Look in the rush of ink that tells you this:
The thousand yard stares are down to you
The thousand mile promises we said were true
As a kiss filed with fire
Burns your lips with desire,
Crumble into the ashes of a phoenix’s pyre
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- by Panic Pirate |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/20/2009 |
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- Title: Phoenix Tears
- Artist: Panic Pirate
- Description: Find your own meaning in it :) I'm open to constructive criticism (please do comment) Also, I realise the rhythm is off a bit. Wrote it after an exam but that's not what it's about at all. I didn't do much tweaking, I just... wrote (let me know if that's a bad idea or not XD) P.S. Yes, crap title, I knoww...
- Date: 05/20/2009
- Tags: phoenix tearslove lies reincarnation
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Shadowashes - 07/01/2009
- Wow, pretty good for a one time written peice. I think the titles good.
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- Pia Penombra - 06/28/2009
- this is BEAUTIFUL!!! looooove this! biggrin
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- Panic Pirate - 05/28/2009
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Thank you! smile
It's great having so much positive feedback!
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- d-a-k-o-t-a_1_45_23 - 05/27/2009
- It is really good!!! I LOVE it ^_^
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- Sunafire - 05/21/2009
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I love this one smile
It may not have a rhyme but it fits!
The content is beautiful and it really makes me happy biggrin - Report As Spam
- Panic Pirate - 05/21/2009
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I know I've said this before but please comment!
I only post them up here for criticism and tips from all you talented Gaians on how to improve anything that needs improving ^_^ - Report As Spam