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I cry for someone,
yet no one understands.
They're always there,
I feel it in the air.
Can you not see
the tears on my face?
Can you not feel
the pain in my heart?
They see as you do not.
They know as you do not
Someone please help me
for I fear it is not the end.
These tears will never dry,
they will never go away.
To haunt me forever,
they will be there.
To laugh in my face,
they will mock me always.
I wish for someone
to help the pain cease.
To diminish the hurt and suffering
that I have undoubtedly caused.
To see the end,
into the night I go.
To find my soul,
and the peace I deserve.
- Title: Into The Night
- Artist: AtoMixxer
- Description: I hope you guys enjoy it.
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: into night
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Lady_Eldae - 08/26/2009
- A bit gloomy, but beautifully sad.
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- Faerie - 06/25/2009
- Some punctuation, but overall wonderful descriptions and feelings composed in this poetry. Brilliant! <3
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- Hatterling - 06/23/2009
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Some puncutation wouldn't hurt. ;3
I love it. It's not all that diffrent than what I've been going through... top marks, Ato-chan! - Report As Spam
- Evailynn - 06/16/2009
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Lovely work you have =)
You should use periods at the end of each sentence though so that others understand better.
Other than that, well written =) - Report As Spam
- Senorita92 - 05/20/2009
- very good!!!!
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- Lady Cecilie - 05/19/2009
- Amazingness!
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