Love

• Artist: baybaygrl93
• Description: I wrote this when me and my ex bf were fighting. it just kinda ends with "it seems like there is no light at the end of the tunnel....." cause it seemed that way at the time. so hope ya like it
  
• Date: 05/14/2009
• Tags: love

Love,

nothing but an emotion.

no one knows how it works or where it comes from,

no one understands it and it is uncontrolable.

for some people it just shows up out of no where and takes control of you,

sometimes it can be the best thing in the world.

but other times it can kill you,

Sometimes when you love some, they don't feel the same way.

your love soon turns into hate,

you feel sad, depressed, almost emotionless.

you wonnder why you felt that way.

you wonder if you'll ever be okay.

you wonder if there is a way out.

a way out from being broken.

it seems like there is no light at the end of the tunnel.....

Comments

[WintersStars]

this was a really good poem but you need to revise and edit the poem just to make sure you didn't miss a word other than that you were great