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as the rain trickles down onto my face
i cant help but think of her grace
i see her now in the back of my mind
i remember now that she was so kind
never once did she frown
she could cheer up the whole town
but now that she is gone
all has become wrong
i look back even deeper now
back when nobody was foul
to a time where there was no crime
before we were affected by the curse called time
back then we all got along
and nobody was wrong
we had much fun together
under that sunny weather
but now in this time and age
no one is the same
now i look like a sage
i barely feel sane
i can no longer remember the time
when i used to laugh and play
me and my friends loved to ryhme
to not remember would be a crime
it was always said
that we would stay with each other
until the time that we were dead
after seeing the lies we ran for cover
so in the end
it didnt pan out the same
we grew out of our trends
man.... life is a game
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- Title: the game
- Artist: ub3rchief
- Description: look i know it sucks but i worked hard on it so dont give me any crap about it not being good. so saying that enjoy :)
- Date: 05/14/2009
- Tags: game life friends
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xXPucketteXx - 05/14/2009
- It IS good. The only thing that got me was you switched rhyme schemes a few times. If you start with AABB then carry it out, don't switch to ABAB. It hinders the flow. Other than that, great job! 3/5
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- Princess Arcainess - 05/14/2009
- I dont think itz crap at all . In fact i think itz good. biggrin
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