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It's become my habit
to accept rejection.
It seems ordinary,
requires no reflection.
Ever since the first time
you cast your shadow on me
I gave myself to you.
It's all I had to believe.
Your light became my darkness,
your kindness was deception.
Your poisoned feathers pierced me
and promised no redemption.
Is there nothing in me
that hasn't been corrupted.
I'm being swallowed up
until there's nothing unaffected.
I can no longer care for
anyone at all.
I don't have the will to believe
in the invincibility of love.

- Title: Everything But your Heart
- Artist: Nemone
- Description: I was originally going to call this "I Own Everything But Your Heart" but it was one space too long to fit.
- Date: 05/14/2009
- Tags: loveless affection
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Estella Celleste - 06/18/2009
- Very good! I love it! Happy writting! heart
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- Zuhukanah - 05/28/2009
- deep, well done, Nemone 3nodding
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- WorIds - 05/17/2009
- I absolutely loved it!5/5 for u,plz write some more stuff!it's so beautiful!it even brought a tear to my eye!
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- Angel Bluestockin - 05/16/2009
- Wonderful, beautiful and powerful. These are the words that describe the poem. As the other guy said 'you have perfect grammar'. I love it. Please, do continue...
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- FuriazFTW - 05/14/2009
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Very powerful words! I liked this poem. You had perfect grammar, and used wonderful symbolism.
5/5. You have a lot of potential; keep up the awesome writing!
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