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Falling through a sky so blue
I wonder why i am here to
It's like i'm swimming down a stream
Am I awake or in a dream?
I look up high
Into the sky
And wonder why
I am so shy
Landing on a cloud so white
That gave me such a startling fright
I look down only to see
Whats that coming towards me?
From nowhere without a sound
i saw the flatness of the ground
OH my goodness i will have to be quick
The sensation is making me feel quite sick
Am i too late?
is this my fate?
Am i just bait?
For the pearly gate?
My short life passes in a flash
Not long now before i crash
i flap my arms as if to fly
I wonder if im going to die
All those things i could of done
Laughed and played would have been fun
As i hurtled to my doom
I wish i was back in my room
With a thump
And a lump
I was sore
I'd hit the floor
NOt as dead as i thought
A little dazed and out of thoughts
I thought i hade landed on my head
All i'd done was fall out of bed
- by Jolly g3mm |
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- | Submitted on 05/13/2009 |
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- Title: Am I awake or in a dream?
- Artist: Jolly g3mm
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Description:
I wrote this for my enlish class, i worked so hard on it all night long. On the other hand the teacher pracitally sed it was crap ;{
Oh well, f** the teachers! Please enjoy! - Date: 05/13/2009
- Tags: dream
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Comments (1 Comments)
- PizzaToGo - 06/16/2009
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eh there are some spelling errors and I didn't quite like the part where you put 'NOt as dead as i thought
A little dazed and out of thoughts'
you put thought/s 2 times it doesn't really appeal to me... sorry to be kind of rude - Report As Spam