Note

• Artist: x1193
• Description: Based on a past adventure that happened on February '09. I gave him a note in November of '08 saying that I loved him, yet he did nothing. That February, I gave him another note, saying to forget what i said in the last note, but still, he did nothing.
  
  So, for those who have had a similar expirience, here it is: The forgotten love that can be found in a forgotten note.
  --Irene
• Date: 05/11/2009
• Tags: note

Watching you,
walk along,
like nothing ever happens.

But remember that note
About my love?
The one that said "I Love You"?

Yeah, I know you know,
I kept watching you,
waiting,
but you never said a word.

Several months later,
I said "Im Sorry",
and gave another note,
telling you to forget my love.

Again, you said no word,
and you walked like nothing happened.
I still watched you,
hoping one day,
you will come to me and say:

"I love you. I want you.
Please don't ever leave."
I say that,
because it might happen someday,
right?

Wrong.

For those who ever felt this way,
know this message that I give,
this love you want from a boy or girl,
it'll never be the same.

--Irene

Comments

[angel41791]

I agree with you completely. and I can really relate with your situation. It was good, but there were parts where the flow seemed rushed. if I could I would give you a 4.5

[Kurai-Purple]

Deep...

[Big Stack Bully Mika]

inspired??? get yourself together,love yourself instead.....

[random-fishy-lady]

.... wow