Trip

• Artist: xallas
• Description: Be careful it could happen to you
  
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• Date: 05/10/2009
• Tags: trip

You are there in a flash
Terror in your recent past
Soon put to sleep
For the pain doesn’t go that deep
You wake up to white
Blinding your sight
Everything weird
Hope shirred
People all around
Mind screaming to every sound
Now you fade away
Life not worth the stay
Dieing
Nothing

Comments

[x - - Dying Inside]

Very nice!

[xallas]

its not a drug trip even though you could look at it that way but instead its about some one who was sent to the hospitle.

[Celtic_Warrioress]

You have a nice rhythym there but it doesn't really seem to convey anything in particular making it just confusing. I presume it has something to do with a drug trip, something sudden happening, just losing yourself but it doesn't really bring that across very effectively.